So you finish your first draft of a novel, and you’re ready to edit. It needs more work than just proofreading – there are things you need to work in, move around, combine, cut, rethink, etc. In other words, it’s time to look at the overall structure and see where everything should go for clarity, effect, and pacing to be the best they can be.
Sometimes it’s easy to see where something can be plugged in, but when it isn’t so obvious, it can be daunting, to say the least, to start rearranging your manuscript, changing the tone of scenes and dialogue to make it all fit together cleanly, unsure what the domino effect of all that effort will be. And if it doesn’t work, you have to undo everything you’ve worked on for weeks or months, and start trying to tackle the problems again.
It’s really hard to hold the entire structure of a book in your head (even your own book), so I decided early on in the editing process of my current novel that I was going to try a different approach to rewriting on a novel-length scale. I made a plot layout for the whole book. For each chapter, I did this:
- Chapter # / Title
- Characters’ Goals & Motivations:
- Chapter Summary
- Questions Raised:
- Points of Conflict:
- Larger Plot Movement:
- Notes & Suggestions:
Goals and motivations are whatever your character(s) in that chapter are striving for, whether that’s “defeat the evil overlord” or “have a positive conversation with his son” or whatever. If you have multiple characters, answer for each of them.
The chapter summary is just a brief account of the events, like an episode guide.
Questions raised means anything that either the characters themselves are asking, or that the reader may be wondering during/after the chapter. “Who is the evil emperor?” or “How did that cheerleader learn black magic?” or “Why did the zombie cross the road?” Anything hinted, foreshadowed, unexplained, etc. that you mean to follow up on later.
Points of conflict should include inner conflict as well as external conflict. It will really help you pinpoint character development over the storyline arc, as well as helping you pace the action and the lead-up to the climactic scenes of the book. If a chapter seems to have no conflict, either (a) cut the chapter or (b) dig deeper for some inner conflict or character dynamic conflicts, and make sure the rewrite brings those to the forefront. People don’t have to fight or even argue to be in conflict – they don’t even have to be upset with each other. They just have to have some goal or need that’s at odds with one another.
Larger plot movement – what, in this chapter, pushed the story arc forward? It’s fine to have a chapter here or there dedicated to subplot, or to deepen the characters, but if you find you have multiple chapters in a row that don’t move the story forward, it’s time to rewrite or rearrange. Also, if you have a high ratio of chapters that don’t move the story forward, you probably want to re-think some of the material. And yes, character development that affects the action in the larger story does count as plot movement!
Notes and suggestions is for anything you realize as you’re reading, like, “I never answered this question in the whole book!” or “Oops, 3 chapters in a row with no forward movement.” “This chapter is kinda short, not much happens…might be a good place to plug in [this scene].”
I found that this really helped my focus with multiple elements of rewriting. It really helped me pinpoint pacing problems, troubleshoot boring chapters, keep the characters’ interactions true even as the characters and their relationships changed and developed, and figure out where I had room to maneuver new material into the book.
I hope it can be likewise helpful to you.